How do you punctuate after a terminal em dash?

A particular use of punctuation jumped out at me as I read a recently published book.

In general, I observe punctuation rules, so I’d like to know if the one used in this book follows an old rule, a new rule, or a house style. I question whether it’s a house style though–unless those change depending on the author—because I have books published by the same house in which this particular style is not used.

EM DASH — This author, as many of us do, used an em dash to indicate interrupted speech. But what struck me was a difference in the punctuation used after that dash. For instance, I would write such a sentence this way:

“I couldn’t possibly let you—”

“Let me? Let me!” His outrage jerked him to his feet. “Since when do I require your permission?”

But if those lines appeared in this book, the first would have been punctuated this way:

“I couldn’t possibly let you—.”

“Let me? Let me!” His outrage jerked him to his feet. “Since when do I require your permission?”

You’ll notice the period after the em dash. I’ve since pulled novels off my shelves searching for sentences with interrupted speech. I haven’t found one yet that duplicates this author/editor’s construction.

Am I behind the times or have I, and countless other authors, been doing it wrong all along?

Your turn: Please tell me, how do you punctuate after a terminal em dash?

(See my next post on using punctuation with the terminal ellipsis.)

 

51 thoughts on “How do you punctuate after a terminal em dash?

  1. This issue has been driving me crazy of late as I’m writing a novel. Adding a period after a dash seems to be contradictory at the end of a quote; but, in the middle, it seems necessary to show both ellipsis and potential end of the statement. Then again, if it is, in fact, necessary mid-way, then maybe–

    Here’s a sample: “I can’t tell you what I’ve been through. These last few nights– It’s not that I don’t love you . . . (quote continues).

    Or maybe I’m bringing up a second issue: whether to space after the dash in this case (maybe remove it?). Any suggestions in either case?

    PS The reason I didn’t want to use an ellipsis is due to the speaker’s emotional state. An ellipsis seems too tame.

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    1. Hello, Claudia, thank you for commenting. It appears to me you’re indicating that the speaker interrupts himself, and if that’s the case, I’m sorry to say I have no answer to your question because I’ve not written a sentence exactly that way. However, I do something similiar with an action. Here are two examples:
      “Why didn’t you—” His eyes widen. “Oh.”
      “You”—he smiles as he pretends to strangle me—“have gone completely mental.”

      You could try something like that. But if you find an answer to how to properly punctuate the sentence as you have it, I hope you’ll come back and share it with me because I’d really like to know. 🙂

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  2. Hi, Linda,

    Some input from Univ. of North Carolina’s Writing Center:

    “In written dialogue, if a speaker suddenly or abruptly stops speaking, hesitates in speech, or is cut off by another speaker, a dash can indicate the pause or interruption.

    Example: “I—I don’t know what you’re talking about,” denied the politician.
    Example: Mimi began to explain herself, saying, “I was thinking—“ “I don’t care what you were thinking,” Rodolpho interrupted.

    These samples suggest no additional punctuation after the dash and no spacing if the speaker interrupts herself. (The second ex. is odd, isn’t it? The site didn’t create a new paragraph for Rodolpho.)

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  3. Thank you for returning to share what you found out, Claudia. Now, that I see their first example, I realize I have written dialogue that way. 🙂 But yes, it is odd that they didn’t start a new paragraph in the second example. It must have been a typo.

    BTW, to me, using the tag “interrupted” is redundant because Rodolpho’s interruption is made obvious by the use of the em dash.

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